With a great shudder, the clouds part, revealing a glittering aperture to a realm of crystal and jade.
The chorus of names peaks, then dies off, leaving behind one last whisper: JADE EMPRESS, it trails away, like the echo of a gavel and long-forgotten judgment.
Then, a cold voice, infinitely austere, intones into your ear: "No."
Silas blinks.
Halos jerks back in surprise.
An eerie, aubergine fire limns the stormy sky as tendrils of unnatural lightning dance from cloud to cloud.
The aubergine fire crackles about the aperture, revealing a tall, spare figure standing just within. She gazes down upon Sapience for a long, silent moment.
Then, without speaking further, She turns away, and the gate seals behind Her.
Silas stares implacably about himself.
(Shallam): Traelor says, "Hail Lady-."
Halos stares implacably about himself.
A cold emptiness penetrates your soul as the Divine Order of Lorielan, the Enlightened is dissolved, following the loss of your Patron.
Then, a cold voice, infinitely austere, intones into your ear: "No."
Some of the writing for this event has been a little hit and miss for me, but that line, especially in the bright green font, was spectacularly crafted and easily one of my personal highlights so far. I think everyone online at the time jumped a little in their chairs when it fired. And the characterisation was perfect, incredibly sleek and efficient (in a way that this post is not), with just two simple adjectives and one well-placed adverb to set up Lorielan's biggest move in centuries, delivered in a single two-letter word. Incredibly good stuff.
soooooo, guess Shallam lost its core figures of faith.
Time for a God of Glitter.
(D.M.A.): Cooper says, "Kyrra is either the most innocent person in the world, or the girl who uses the most innuendo seemingly unintentionally but really on purpose."
Slight derail: Can we still solve Lorielan's Mazes with Her absent? I nearly had the third one figured out
"Faded away like the stars in the morning, Losing their light in the glorious sun, Thus would we pass from this earth and its toiling, Only remembered for what we have done."
Lorielan must have read my forum posts, that shit was harsh!
Planning pre-emptive blaming of @Draekar for ruining my Logomas.
I actually think She -was- coming back to help Shallam, but took one look at @Silasdiscussing Shallam's war plans over the Holy Conclave and that inspired the "No"
I wouldn't rule that out entirely! It is interesting that they did that betrayal with her...I always did think better of Mithraea/Pentharian. Not so much Miramar, though - for whatever reason the realm just didn't appeal to me (nor did the symbols, temple design, denizens, etc). Gladius and Roshai were certainly not characters on the level of Mordanyconus (though they'd match denizens like Sharbrena or Polynikes, I think), but they were pretty good nonetheless. Who the heck was Miramar's denizen high priest? All those critiques apply to Lorielan too. Crystal just isn't as cool as fire.
I wouldn't rule that out entirely! It is interesting that they did that betrayal with her...I always did think better of Mithraea/Pentharian. Not so much Miramar, though - for whatever reason the realm just didn't appeal to me (nor did the symbols, temple design, denizens, etc). Gladius and Roshai were certainly not characters on the level of Mordanyconus (though they'd match denizens like Sharbrena or Polynikes, I think), but they were pretty good nonetheless. Who the heck was Miramar's denizen high priest? All those critiques apply to Lorielan too. Crystal just isn't as cool as fire.
I'd disagree. Gladius and Roshai have amazingly rich histories, are awesomely well developed characters and have played part in a number of epic events over the years.
Likewise Lorielan has the Kx'Krah and those things are awesome.
The reason why you might have a different view though is basically Mordanyconus = Babel, because Babel isn't a God that hangs out with his people or gets his hands dirty in events. A bit like Twinkles is with Dusk.
Every Divine is different though and for the Te'serra they have always been a lot more personal so you 'll have them turn up themselves more often than they would send a denizen, and so this leaves those denizens out of the spotlight too often.
I know that *pentharian at least (may He rest in peace ) spent a lot of time later on developing his denizens and interacting through them, but the Te'Serra have always been more personable, and that's fitting to the Good ideology. They should be public figures in their own right, coupled with the use of their denizens, and I think the balance they were reaching on that in the latter stages was really good.
Totes agree though that Penth/Mith should have been the foundation of Good, since Lori/Miramar always seemed more neutral to me. But, whatevs, they were Shallam's elder gods so it was okay.
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Cascades of quicksilver light streak across the firmament as the celestial voice of Ourania intones, "Oh Jarrod..."
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Time for a God of Glitter.
Losing their light in the glorious sun,
Thus would we pass from this earth and its toiling,
Only remembered for what we have done."
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Planning pre-emptive blaming of @Draekar for ruining my Logomas.
A little??
I actually think She -was- coming back to help Shallam, but took one look at @Silasdiscussing Shallam's war plans over the Holy Conclave and that inspired the "No"
Those look like taxxons from Animorphs.
I'd disagree. Gladius and Roshai have amazingly rich histories, are awesomely well developed characters and have played part in a number of epic events over the years.
Likewise Lorielan has the Kx'Krah and those things are awesome.
The reason why you might have a different view though is basically Mordanyconus = Babel, because Babel isn't a God that hangs out with his people or gets his hands dirty in events. A bit like Twinkles is with Dusk.
Every Divine is different though and for the Te'serra they have always been a lot more personal so you 'll have them turn up themselves more often than they would send a denizen, and so this leaves those denizens out of the spotlight too often.