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@Jiraishin What's general policy on using parenthesis in this sort of writing?For example:He had red hair, parted to the left, that was long and curly.vs.He had red hair (parted to the left) that was long and curly.
You absolutely do not use parentheses for adding a minor, closely related details. Parentheses are meant to break up (the flow of) a sentence and draw attention (to an aside), ((comment), or explanation) that isn't directly related to the content (of that sentence)
Pyori and Elisella are both xoran (formerly human). Amunet's a human (I think?), as is Keorin. Shirszae's an atavian. Jemisha's a troll... To be honest, lately I've seen a lot more non-sirens than sirens. Not just in Ashtan... Though it doesn't stop them having the figure of a siren >.>
Venmara said:But I agree with the point, it's just him. Especially given the number of Rajamalan and Atavian I see in Cyrene.