Pfft. You still haven't hunted him down yet? Silly Cyrenian
Rainsford did not want to believe what his reason told him was true, but
the truth was as evident as the sun that had by now pushed through the
morning mists. The general was playing with him! The general was saving
him for another day's sport! The Cossack was the cat; he was the mouse.
Then it was that Rainsford knew the full meaning of terror.
You point a crystal staff at a hideous nel'dorath, and a stream of bile-like acid streams out, covering her, who screams in agony.
You have scored an OBLITERATING CRITICAL hit!
A hideous nel'dorath smiles softly.
Wild looks of pain cross a hideous nel'dorath's face as the acid eats visible holes in her skull.
Her body convulses rigidly, and then she is dead.
You have slain a hideous nel'dorath, retrieving the corpse.
Your soul cries out in ecstasy as it reaches new heights of power. You have advanced to level 98.
You have reached the illustrious level of Lord of Creation.
one to go!
Like others said, that level will go by fast, thanks to all the criticals. Something like a 41% chance of a critical hit before factoring in critical pendants, traits or racial boosts. Only took me a day or two for the final push, I think.
Picked your colour yet?
(Also, nel'dorath are creepy.)
Yes, yes they are. I died immediately after my post to two of them, lost the level, and went to regain it by killing their families
Aurora says, "Tharvis, why are you always breaking things?!" Artemis says, "You are so high maintenance, Tharvis, gosh." Tecton says, "It's still your fault, Tharvis."
I noticed a general trend for people's wielded items to have commas in them, which they shouldn't.
INV: a web bomb, a keen, Targossian longsword.
You'll find the comma in most weapons are because of how descriptors work in the new forging system.
(D.M.A.): Cooper says, "Kyrra is either the most innocent person in the world, or the girl who uses the most innuendo seemingly unintentionally but really on purpose."
In the "keen, Targossian longsword" example, I'd say the comma is optional, but not wrong; you could either consider Targossian a separate adjective, or consider "Targossian longsword" a noun compound.
Dealt with Vorondil family (well it mostly stemmed from one person, but poured over to the others) drama. I swear the amount of drama there is could produce a novella. There isn't even a lot of us! Aughhh, I'm going crazy!
Dealt with Vorondil family (well it mostly stemmed from one person, but poured over to the others) drama. I swear the amount of drama there is could produce a novella. There isn't even a lot of us! Aughhh, I'm going crazy!
That's why I keep my distance and quit most of the family clans. Sorry they're giving you're trouble!
In the "keen, Targossian longsword" example, I'd say the comma is optional, but not wrong; you could either consider Targossian a separate adjective, or consider "Targossian longsword" a noun compound.
Given that commas are used as separators between items in a text environment, they should be avoided. I always thought this was customization 101.
There have always been items with commas, both in admin-made and player-made items. It's just more common now because it's unavoidable if you want two descriptors on a weapon (which seems to be what most people prefer, and there are also some advantages to using two instead of one).
In the "keen, Targossian longsword" example, I'd say the comma is optional, but not wrong; you could either consider Targossian a separate adjective, or consider "Targossian longsword" a noun compound.
Given that commas are used as separators between items in a text environment, they should be avoided. I always thought this was customization 101.
Eh, maybe, though it's a bit hard for me to imagine, for example, mistaking "a web bomb, a keen, Targossian longsword" for three items instead of two, even briefly, and it's even less of a problem for wielded items, which you don't see as often in lists. Anyway, I took your complaint as purely grammatical and was only responding to it as such. I can see an argument for avoiding unnecessary commas (though I've never heard it suggested as a general rule before now), but since they'll be grammatically required for most descriptions with multiple descriptors, it's just something you'll have to get used to, I think.
In the "keen, Targossian longsword" example, I'd say the comma is optional, but not wrong; you could either consider Targossian a separate adjective, or consider "Targossian longsword" a noun compound.
Given that commas are used as separators between items in a text environment, they should be avoided. I always thought this was customization 101.
Eh, maybe, though it's a bit hard for me to imagine, for example, mistaking "a web bomb, a keen, Targossian longsword" for three items instead of two, even briefly, and it's even less of a problem for wielded items, which you don't see as often in lists. Anyway, I took your complaint as purely grammatical and was only responding to it as such. I can see an argument for avoiding unnecessary commas (though I've never heard it suggested as a general rule before now), but since they'll be grammatically required for most descriptions with multiple descriptors, it's just something you'll have to get used to, I think.
Ya I agree with you. I just think it looks weird. Clothing, artifacts, armour etc all have historically followed these rules. I've only seen them broken when people tried to customize things. Just an observation.
Since I have your attention @sena can you give any examples of admin made items that have commas in their short descriptions?
Since I have your attention @sena can you give any examples of admin made items that have commas in their short descriptions?
The most obvious example is denizen names, which commonly have commas, and are likely to be in your inventory as corpses.
A few examples I've seen of non-denizen admin-made items (only counting ones that are likely to be in the inventory, not kept in a room): [spoiler] "a dark, aromatic pipe", "a fine, white teacup", "an adorable, stuffed bunny", "a warm, bloody liver", "a stuffed, roasted pigeon", "a dark chocolate, caramel-filled fairy", "a bead of innocent, subtle vanilla perfume", "a bead of soft, smooth-scented floral perfume", "a bead of fresh, grassy perfume", "a bead of peppery, clove-scented perfume", "a small, deflated red balloon", "a pair of armoured, spiked sabaton", "a gold-trimmed, carved mahogany vial", "an arcane, crystal vial", "a sturdy, waterproof backpack", "a small, tanned leather pouch", "a large, baked potato", "a scented, tulip-decorated letter", "an ivory letter with gold, silver, and blue a..." (I don't know the full name since it's past the limit of what shops will display), "a Siren-decorated, sky-blue letter", "a large, filled black olive", "a firm, ripe pomegranate", "a fluffy, round biscuit", "a slender, yew bark vial", "a sleek, obsidian vial", "a red-hued, wooden vial", "glistening, seductive rose pink lipstick", "a long, humanoid bone", "a giant, frenzied bloodworm plush", "a giant, fiendish nightmare plush", "an old, glass poison vial", "a rusty, oyster-encrusted axe", "a sharp, brazen spear with billowing neck ri..." (shop limit again), "a black, bronze-veined wax writing tablet", "large, green olives", "small, chocolate beans", "a gold-rimmed, glass tarot deck", "a sea-hardened, skeletal figurehead", "small, carved glass of sloe gin", and "a long, plum-coloured skirt". For some artefact examples, there's "a plump, incandescent pillow" and "a long, elegant ebony pipe". [/spoiler]
The weapons you have a problem with are basically admin-designed as well, at least in that it's an admin-made template and players don't have any choice about the commas.
Since I have your attention @sena can you give any examples of admin made items that have commas in their short descriptions?
The most obvious example is denizen names, which commonly have commas, and are likely to be in your inventory as corpses.
A few examples I've seen of non-denizen admin-made items (only counting ones that are likely to be in the inventory, not kept in a room): [spoiler] "a dark, aromatic pipe", "a fine, white teacup", "an adorable, stuffed bunny", "a warm, bloody liver", "a stuffed, roasted pigeon", "a dark chocolate, caramel-filled fairy", "a bead of innocent, subtle vanilla perfume", "a bead of soft, smooth-scented floral perfume", "a bead of fresh, grassy perfume", "a bead of peppery, clove-scented perfume", "a small, deflated red balloon", "a pair of armoured, spiked sabaton", "a gold-trimmed, carved mahogany vial", "an arcane, crystal vial", "a sturdy, waterproof backpack", "a small, tanned leather pouch", "a large, baked potato", "a scented, tulip-decorated letter", "an ivory letter with gold, silver, and blue a..." (I don't know the full name since it's past the limit of what shops will display), "a Siren-decorated, sky-blue letter", "a large, filled black olive", "a firm, ripe pomegranate", "a fluffy, round biscuit", "a slender, yew bark vial", "a sleek, obsidian vial", "a red-hued, wooden vial", "glistening, seductive rose pink lipstick", "a long, humanoid bone", "a giant, frenzied bloodworm plush", "a giant, fiendish nightmare plush", "an old, glass poison vial", "a rusty, oyster-encrusted axe", "a sharp, brazen spear with billowing neck ri..." (shop limit again), "a black, bronze-veined wax writing tablet", "large, green olives", "small, chocolate beans", "a gold-rimmed, glass tarot deck", "a sea-hardened, skeletal figurehead", "small, carved glass of sloe gin", and "a long, plum-coloured skirt". For some artefact examples, there's "a plump, incandescent pillow" and "a long, elegant ebony pipe". [/spoiler]
The weapons you have a problem with are basically admin-designed as well, at least in that it's an admin-made template and players don't have any choice about the commas.
Spent a lot of time slamming my head against a wall while listening to some guys talk about their (self-inflicted) girl problems. Did some sparring. And finally am learning lots in Survival and it's really noticeable. So I guess overall I'm happy.
Lord Marshal Hasar Lichlord's words quietly thrum through the air as he says, "No one panick." #2015PEACEthedream!
A dove comes flying into the room, deposits a letter into your hands, warbles cheerfully, and flies away.
You read what is written on an elegant white letter: To whomever shall read this,
Tell me yes or no for those sacks of divinity up in the Garden to take ten million of our hard-earned sovereigns in exchange for a pair of lousy snakes and some glowy crystal thing.
-Quackers
looks like we're getting our ouroboi and master crystal
Commas used between adjectives, as explained by my hero Grammar Girl.
The complaint isn't really about grammar, but about comma-separated lists of comma-containing items, with no distinction between the two types of commas.
Spent a lot of time slamming my head against a wall while listening to some guys talk about their (self-inflicted) girl problems. Did some sparring. And finally am learning lots in Survival and it's really noticeable. So I guess overall I'm happy.
This is a significant departure from the Red Bull and endorphins that characterized life before guys. Use your Mhaldorian RP license to limit portion sizes. Drama should be the garnish, not the meal.
You close your eyes, drawing yourself into a trance as you begin to summon forth the devastating Tzantza curse. Shecks seems diminished. Blood begins to run from the eyes and nose of Shecks. You are not wielding a doll of Shecks, and may not perform a soulrend. 5306h 4009m 100%e 93%w |EE [7] {42} (-350m, 7.9%) A Mhojave falcon rips out a chunk of your flesh with its beak. Your shield completely absorbs the damage. 5306h 4009m 100%e 93%w |EE [7] {42} Shecks grunts a bit and then lets out a loud "OINK!" 5306h 4009m 100%e 93%w |EE [7] {42}
You feel an aura of rebounding surround you. 5306h 4009m 100%e 93%w |EE [7] {42} You have recovered balance on all limbs. 3.109s 5306h 4009m 100%e 93%w XX|EE [7] {42} A Mhojave falcon dives at you, raking your face with its talons. 5198h 4009m 100%e 93%w XX|EE [7] {42} (-108h, 2.0%)
Your aura of weapons rebounding disappears. You snap your eyes open, the power of the curse building inside you. Your face contorts as you raise an imperious finger towards Shecks and utter a single word: "Tzantza." Shecks winces and stumbles as the skin on his head shrinks and hardens like aged leather. His eyes roll back and strangled gurgles escape his rapidly diminishing mouth as he struggles to breathe. His head withers like a drying fruit and with a final dull "crack," his skull splinters, the shards embedding themselves in his brain. You have slain Shecks.
Shecks leaves to the ether. You look around triumphantly and realise you are the last one standing. You have WON the game of Rampage.
You point a crystal staff at an ursu man, and cause a bolt of lightning to cascade out and roar screaming into him.
You have scored an OBLITERATING CRITICAL hit!
The lightning bolt finishes an ursu man off, and as he dies, his eyeballs explode from their sockets with the fury of the storm.
You have slain an ursu man, retrieving the corpse.
Your soul cries out in ecstasy as it reaches new heights of power. You have advanced to level 99.
You have reached the illustrious level of Greater Dragon.
Aurora says, "Tharvis, why are you always breaking things?!" Artemis says, "You are so high maintenance, Tharvis, gosh." Tecton says, "It's still your fault, Tharvis."
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Apparently, I'm in high demand.
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Artemis says, "You are so high maintenance, Tharvis, gosh."
Tecton says, "It's still your fault, Tharvis."
You have reached the illustrious level of Plenary.
For the third time!
/wristed to @Twilight ICly.
All in all, a very productive day.
I take commissions.
INV:
a web bomb, a keen, Targossian longsword.
Since I have your attention @sena can you give any examples of admin made items that have commas in their short descriptions?
A few examples I've seen of non-denizen admin-made items (only counting ones that are likely to be in the inventory, not kept in a room):
[spoiler]
"a dark, aromatic pipe", "a fine, white teacup", "an adorable, stuffed bunny", "a warm, bloody liver", "a stuffed, roasted pigeon", "a dark chocolate, caramel-filled fairy", "a bead of innocent, subtle vanilla perfume", "a bead of soft, smooth-scented floral perfume", "a bead of fresh, grassy perfume", "a bead of peppery, clove-scented perfume", "a small, deflated red balloon", "a pair of armoured, spiked sabaton", "a gold-trimmed, carved mahogany vial", "an arcane, crystal vial", "a sturdy, waterproof backpack", "a small, tanned leather pouch", "a large, baked potato", "a scented, tulip-decorated letter", "an ivory letter with gold, silver, and blue a..." (I don't know the full name since it's past the limit of what shops will display), "a Siren-decorated, sky-blue letter", "a large, filled black olive", "a firm, ripe pomegranate", "a fluffy, round biscuit", "a slender, yew bark vial", "a sleek, obsidian vial", "a red-hued, wooden vial", "glistening, seductive rose pink lipstick", "a long, humanoid bone", "a giant, frenzied bloodworm plush", "a giant, fiendish nightmare plush", "an old, glass poison vial", "a rusty, oyster-encrusted axe", "a sharp, brazen spear with billowing neck ri..." (shop limit again), "a black, bronze-veined wax writing tablet", "large, green olives", "small, chocolate beans", "a gold-rimmed, glass tarot deck", "a sea-hardened, skeletal figurehead", "small, carved glass of sloe gin", and "a long, plum-coloured skirt".
For some artefact examples, there's "a plump, incandescent pillow" and "a long, elegant ebony pipe".
[/spoiler]
The weapons you have a problem with are basically admin-designed as well, at least in that it's an admin-made template and players don't have any choice about the commas.
Album of Bluef during her time in Achaea
You read what is written on an elegant white letter:
To whomever shall read this,
Tell me yes or no for those sacks of divinity up in the Garden to take
ten million of our hard-earned sovereigns in exchange for a pair of
lousy snakes and some glowy crystal thing.
-Quackers
looks like we're getting our ouroboi and master crystal
First Delos rampage won
omg eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee finally (ty you know who you are)the feels
;_;
Artemis says, "You are so high maintenance, Tharvis, gosh."
Tecton says, "It's still your fault, Tharvis."