Self description and persona



  • KyrraKyrra Australia
    Harley got devoured by the undead, exploring some old wizard's tomb...
    (D.M.A.): Cooper says, "Kyrra is either the most innocent person in the world, or the girl who uses the most innuendo seemingly unintentionally but really on purpose."

  • Not sure if this is a good description or not so here goes.

    He is a tiger-like rajamala who stands at about six foot and weighs about hundred pounds or so. His
    handsome features were sharp and well proportioned with a lean build. His fur is silver and trimmed
    with white coloured eyes with a little tint of blue in them. He has a small, normal looking snout
    with two long fangs that overlap both sides his bottom jaw.

    (go ahead give me any good advice or crit. I might add more to it but not sure if I should or not)

    1) are, not were. You're still here.
    2) You use 'with' in 3/4 of your sentences. Maybe try rewriting two of them to not use it?

  • meh, the Egyptians were pretty sure that your stuff went with you when you died. I don't find it much harder to roll with then, say, the fact that we have spirits that are coming back to life in the first place

  • @Chidra: Chryenth is right, but he forgot the link. Here you go!
  • sorry, thanks @Delphinus for the link.
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