We're currently working upon the war proposal from the other thread, and one of the small flavour powers will be to gain access to a war specific deathsight (think similar to divine order's crusade one). We were originally going to come up with them ourselves, but it occured to us that we could run a contest to pick the best ones instead.
So:
- No more than 3 deathsights per org per person.
- You can post for cities your character isn't a member of.
- 200 credits per winning entry.
We'll run this for the next week!
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Targossas:
> The clouds part as a ray of light graces KILLER's exuberant form, standing over the fallen KILLEE.
Ashtan:
> Discordant, shrill cries escape the withering lips of KILLEE, before KILLER rends them silent.
Cyrene:
> Bestowing an honourable demise, KILLER conquers KILLEE with knightly accord.
Eleusis:
> The Ithmia blossoms as KILLER bestows a new feast unto its soil, in the form of fallen KILLEE.
Hashan:
> Sourceless commendations sound from the dark as KILLER unites KILLEE with the cold, hard ground.
Mhaldor:
> Barely given a chance to cool, KILLEE's corpse is ingested by foul bloodworms at the behest of KILLER.
Whispering soft prayers to Light and Fire, (Person) purges (Victim) from Creation.
Hashan:
Letting none stand in the way of Progress, (Person) teaches (Victim) their folly.
Ashtan:
Succumbing to chaos, (Victim) has been a step forward for (Person)'s Ascension.
Eleusis:
Daring to defy the forces of Nature, (Person) reclaims (Victim)'s body to back to the earth.
Mhaldor;
By purging (Victim)'s weakness from them, (Person) has shown the true teachings of Evil.
Cyrene:
Never bending to the horrors of the past, (person) slays (Victim) as a testament to Cyrene's fortitude.
Exemplifying the Fifth Truth, Taryius has mercilessly dispatched Farrah.
Triumphing easily over Farrah, Taryius has made clear; The body may be made stronger through combat.
The art of the Fifth Truth lives onwards as Taryius engages Farrah, ending her life in service to Evil's city.
A radiant sunburst illuminates the skies as <killer> cleanses Creation of <victim> with an exuberant and Righteous Fury.
The maw of the ivory dragon and the flames of the eternal fire have erased every trace of <victim> from Creation at <killer>'s direction.
Accused, judged, and condemned, <victim> has been dispassionately destroyed, the latest victim of the Targossian inquisition brought to bear by <killer>.
Eleusis:
Perishing utterly before the savage might of <killer>, <person>'s bones will gleam in the sun when the scavengers have finished with the carcass.
More beast than mortal, <killer> has brought Nature's killer nature to bear upon <victim>, leaving nothing but a bloodied and ruined carcass in the wake of <his|her> rampage.
Cyrene:
Ending the threat of <victim> before it even began, <person> has destroyed <him|her> with a rush of merciless fury in defence of <his|her> mountain home.
Cold as the snows of <his|her> mountain home, <person> has brought the unforgiving justice of the Vashnars to bear upon <victim>.
Mhaldor:
As the warrior of malevolent scripture felled every last one of his foes, <person> has dispatched <victim> without even the faintest trace of hesitation.
In <his|her> rage, <person> has become an unstoppable exemplar of Brutality, destroying <victim> utterly and wholly in the name of the Lord of Malevolence.
Relishing in the act of violence, <person> has broken <victim>, leaving behind nothing but a bloodied, ruined body in testament to the Strength afforded <him|her> by the Seven Truths.
Cyrene: With artful ease, (killer) brings (killee) to a bloody denouement.
Eleusis: (killer) has returned (killee) to the great cycle.
Ashtan: Entropy's hand, (killer), brings (killee) to a chaotic end.
Mhaldor: (killer) has shown (killee) their respective places under the Truths.
Hashan: (killer) has ushered (killee) into the shadows.
Targossas: (killee) has fallen to (killer)'s Righteous fury.
Face as cold as ice, <killer> casts the body of <killed> to the ground.
With a sneer, <killer> dispatches <killed>, displaying to all the true might of evil’s teachings.
Eleusis:
<Killer> has shown <killed> that the forces of nature are greater than they had thought.
With feral glee, <killer> has brutally torn the life from <killed>.
Enraged at the exploitation of nature, <killer> savagely rips the life from <killed>.
Cyrene
letting out a defiant cry, <killer> strikes down <killed> in defence of the city of Cyrene.
Ashtan:
<Killer strikes <killed> from creation, yet another victory for The Seat of Chaos.
Hashan:
With a sudden strike from the shadows, <killer> swiftly ends the life of <killed>.
With the enhanced scientific understanding of <killed’s> weaknesses, <killer> swiftly brings him/her down.
Targossas
<Killer> lifts his/her voice in a prayer to The Righteous fire as he/she strikes <Killed down.
<Killer> cries out for the guidance of The Lightbringer as he/she passes judgement on <Killed’s> sins.
Cyrene
The icy currents of Shuun'eludiela whisper the notes of $victim's death, drowned beneath the lashing storm of $killer's cold fury.
Amidst flourishes of song and revelry troubadours sing a tale of war and woe, of $Killer, champion of the valley's starry walls, and the felling of $victim, Cyrene's foe.
Excited giggles and childish horseplay follow a gaggle of children as they run along the length of Ministrickle Road, re-enacting the battle where $killer had slain a would-be invader.
And you won't understand the cause of your grief...
...But you'll always follow the voices beneath.
Hashan:
1. Deciding that they are an impediment to the Progress of the Shadow Court, $killer has removed the obstacle that was $victim.
2. Another tally mark is added to the belt of Progress as $killer ends the life of $victim.
Mhaldor gets an extra because I can't choose.
Mhaldor:
An ominous crimson miasma casts a bloody pall over the area as $killer brutally exterminates $person, exposing the truth of their weakness.
An ominous crimson miasma stains the firmament bloody as $killer brutally exterminates $person, deeming him|her unworthy of a place in Evil's dominion.
Targossas:
White-hot flame blazes heavenwards in incandescent rapture as $killer mercilessly executes the Bloodsworn's judgment upon $person.
Cyrene:
The strident anthem of victory reverberates throughout the world as $person crumbles before $killer's indomitable Vashnarian courage.
Hashan:
Silken susurrations carry $killer's name upon the wind, whispering the tale of his|her mastery over $person in the name of Progress.
Ashtan:
Sizzling spears of lightning streak towards the ground as $killer obliterates $person from Creation, a crackling tribute to the inevitability of Chaos.
Eleusis:
Predators across the realm erupt in primal exultation as $killer completes his hunt, savagely unleashing the full wrath of Nature upon $person.
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Targossas:
1) A chorus of cheers ripple across Blackstone Isle as the Faithful laud $Killer's victory over $Scrub.
2) Cries of triumph ring out from Blackstone Isle, commemorating $Scrub's demise at the hands of $Killer.
3) The banks of the Silverveil River churn as the Isles of Targossas reverberate with the warcries of the Faithful, celebrating $Killer's victory over $Scrub.
A group of <faction> has mobbed <target> to death, with <killer> landing the final blow.
Example:
A group of Targossians has mobbed Proficy to death, with Ismay landing the final blow.
One on one kills
The <faction> <killer> has slain the <faction2> <target> in single combat.
Example:
The Mhaldorian Proficy has slain the Hashani Mezghar in single combat.
Applicable for all factions
Continuing the traditions of the Imperator's Court, $Killer devours the existence of $Killee for the glory of Chaos.
Culling Creation's ordered existence, $Killer brutally casts aside $Killee, manifesting the inevitability of Chaos' Dominion.
I really enjoyed @Micaelis' location-specific ones, so here's one more in that vein:
Creation shatters as lava erupts across the scorched isle of Ashtan in tumultuous response to $Killer's triumph over $Killee.
Cyrene
The white drakes of the mountains roar with approval as <killer> eliminates <killee> as a threat to the Vashnars.
The icy mountain air steals away <killee’s> final breath as <he|she> falls in battle, <killer> dashing away to continue the fight for <her|his> City.
With indignant rage, <killer> executes <killee> for bringing war to <his|her> mountain home.
Targossas
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Holy Flames encase the carcass of the heretic, KILLEE, leaving naught but cinders at the behest of KILLER.
As an act of a Warden of Creation, KILLER conducts the final deliverance of KILLEE.
Cheers erupt from Silverbright Square as it is heralded to the Dawnspear that KILLER, the ARMYRANK, has vanquished KILLEE, the ARMYRANK.
Aegis, God of War says, "You are dismissed from My demense, Astarod. Go forth and fight well. Bleed fiercely, and climb the purpose you have sought to chase for."
ELEUSIS
(Spring|Summer|Winter|Autumn) winds whistle through the forests of Sapience as $KILLER lays $KILLEE's corpse to rest in nature's embrace.
-Changes based on the current IG season.
ASHTAN
A whispered invocation to <CHAOS LORD> escapes $KILLER's lips, as he brings $KILLEE's life to an abrupt conclusion.
Whispering an invocation to <CHAOS LORD>, $KILLEE brings $KILLEE's life to an abrupt conclusion in service to the Court.
-Idea being that the Chaos Lord would be randomly selected from the known pantheon of Chaos Lords, and therefor different every deathsight. For example it could be an invocation to Dameron, or maybe Lycantha or Palpatar, etc etc. How chaotic!-
CYRENE
Crystalline waters spew skyward from the Unending Spring, an aqueous salute to $KILLER's triumph over $KILLEE.
Cheers are heard from the Dawnspear, as *killer* has eradicated *killee*, rebuilding Creation under the banners of Light, Righteousness and Good
Hundreds of arrows are seen over the Dawnspear, as the bow-maidens of the Dawnspear salute the triumph of "killer" over "killee"
> Children's glee sounds out across the Mirror Isles as a storyteller reenacts the battle where [KILLER] felled [KILLEE].
> Caliphan wets a quill with ink as he marks the victory of [KILLER] over [KILLEE] in the annals of Targossas' history.
Uttering a prayer to the Bloodsworn with (his|her) victory, [Slayer] has removed [Slain] from the path of Creation's advancement.
I personally like almost all of those by @Jurixe as well as @Taryius' 'Fifth Truth' deathsights.
Dawnblade -
The legions of the Dawnblade advance, the boots of (killer) trampling the corpse of (killee) further into the mud and viscera.
Luminai -
Truth has borne the weaknesses of (killee), as the Luminai subdue another target.
Harbingers -
The censer of (killer) swings over the corpse of (killee), billowing holy smoke as the zealous prayers of the Harbingers chant praises to the strength of the Dawnspear.
Targossas in general
The piercing Light has revealed the Truth of (killee)'s folly, as (killer) strikes (him/her) down with Righteous fervor.
Slayer has proven to Slain that he|she is merely another obstacle that the Heart of the Vashnars can and will overcome.
Slain crumples under the mountainous resolve of Slayer and the Heart of the Vashnars.
If Slain is fortunate the artists of the Heart of the Vashnars will record his|her name in their works dedicated to the triumphs of Slayer.
joke:
Slain should have taken the hint when Slayer gave their speech on the merits of extreme xenophobia.
Vakvyr resumes his novel after being rudely interrupted by Archaeon's ill fated assault.
Taryius has viciously pummeled Archaeon into submission before the Lord.
Her hypothesis proving correct, Farrah has proven scientifically that she is the better of Archaeon.