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Crafting Good Item Descriptions: A Guide

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  • HalosHalos San FranciscoPosts: 1,456Member @@ - Legendary Achaean
    edited December 2018
    ‘Brittle’ sounds like the perfect word for obsidian. Not ‘soft’.

    ”Softer” yes. Softer than a whole range of materials. A description which supplied the basis/point of reference for the comparison of “softer than __” for the benefit of the viewer, say, one that also had mithril (pls don’t) then that would make more sense. 

    Not just “hey guys soft rocks” in a vacuum though. People say “rock-hard”. No one says “rock-soft”.

    Jiraishin
  • KyrraKyrra Sanctum of the SkyPosts: 4,792Member @@ - Legendary Achaean
    Soft rock though.
    (D.M.A.): Cooper says, "Kyrra is either the most innocent person in the world, or the girl who uses the most innuendo seemingly unintentionally but really on purpose."

    Halos
  • JiraishinJiraishin trapped in a thawing block of icePosts: 1,420Member @@ - Legendary Achaean
    edited December 2018
    Kyrra said:
    Soft rock though.
    I'm writing some music into my next parody description!
     (I design ridiculous parody items to deal with burnout) 
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  • KyrraKyrra Sanctum of the SkyPosts: 4,792Member @@ - Legendary Achaean
    Jiraishin said:
    Kyrra said:
    Soft rock though.
    I'm writing some music into my next parody description!
     (I design ridiculous parody items to deal with burnout) 
    To temper the heavier metals, I hope.
    (D.M.A.): Cooper says, "Kyrra is either the most innocent person in the world, or the girl who uses the most innuendo seemingly unintentionally but really on purpose."

    JiraishinHalos
  • TahquilTahquil Posts: 4,098Member @@ - Legendary Achaean
    Ohhh baby I’m rock soft.
    RiellHalos
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