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Do you have any tips, pointers and hints on writing a good description?
Earlier today someone suggested I needed a makeover - specifically a better description. So I came onto the forums in search of help (in game its slightly harder to ask with out sounding insane) and couldn't find anything that helped much. So, with my hat held before me I ask, what kind of things should be included in the description, what order, what makes a description interesting and memorable? Perhaps you can post an example or two or give me a few pointers on what I should be doing to flesh out my description.
This is not a plea for someone to write out a description for me - I wish to create her myself.
Someone has already suggested that this might be slightly insane.
My current two-line basic description is thus: \/
Asyru is some what short of stature. Her waif-like body supports a small elfin head. Flowing auburn ringlets that are not caught in her simple platted braid tumble down over
Also in regards to where characters came from - Where DO they come from and what did the fire do? Do they still have memories?