Currently, there's a short sentence at the beginning of your description that says something like 'He is a frog-like Grook' or 'She is a beautiful Siren' etc. While these are fine for the most part, the one that's always bugged me has been the Grook description. No matter how I look at it, I simply can't get past the fact that I see 'frog-like' and immediately think of a variant of this:
I tried to find a more cartoony image that better reflects how I picture it, but internet's being stupid. Regardless, it doesn't seem to fit the Grook as it's depicted at the top of this forum background, which certainly doesn't conjure images of cartoon frogs in my head and looks more alien/almost fishlike than anything else. More importantly, it also looks more badass!
The point of this post is to suggest that the adjective used in front of the racial name be a little less limiting, for Grooks at least and maybe less so for Rajamala. I can think of maybe something like 'He is an amphibious Grook' that would fit, and maybe giving more descriptive characteristics in the help scroll for that race + official picture to help players envision what it should look like.
Not a major change/high priority idea at all, just something I mentioned offhand to a friend playing a Grook and he said I should idea it. So here it is!
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