(I do feel bad though, I have to say, about creating Achaea-related content that visually-challenged players can't appreciate. Apologies for that, everyone. Can't be helped, but sucks to exclude people.)
Finally, the pronunciation of Achaea can be laid to rest.
ETA: Sharing this around the office too.
Yay, I had it right.
I always had it wrong, I pronounced it Ack-ee-ah, of course I pronounce my name Ack-ee-murst so that could be why. I also always thought Sarapis was Sir-ah-pis. Since I'm on the subject by best friend ever thought Beau was pronounced Bee-ah-you. Pronunciation is fun!
So, Achaea is actually named after the city-state in classical Greece. Nobody knows how classical Greek was pronounced, so I could have it wrong, but regardless, that's how our world is pronounced. ah-KAY-ah
"Under all that we think, lives all that we believe, like the ultimate veil of our spirits." --Antonio Machado
"The belief that becomes truth for me is that which allows me the best use of my strength, the best means of putting my virtues into action." --Andre Gide
"It is not enough to have a good mind; the main thing is to use it well." --Rene Descartes
I still think you're talking a bit fast IMO, although it's better than
the last time. Also the sound has that weird "I am speaking through a
mic" effect (I dunno how to describe it), but I figure that's cause
you're doing it in your office.
The artwork is still moving pretty fast and that God's photozoom thing is also still a bit jarring to me. Maybe it's because the picture is actually a close-up of the god pic, I keep expecting to see more detail as the pic moves away from the camera and then it stops at a close-up quite suddenly.
I suggest either the picture moves slower and fades further and further backwards (giving viewers time to appreciate the artwork as a whole) Or you have the pictures moving towards the camera instead. Either option will add a few more seconds to the video.
That will also give you time to pace your narration a little slower as well. My opinion is that if you get the pacing of the video to a comfortable level, the narration will follow naturally.
Also the very first line just bugs me. It sounds like you're saying "I'm Sarapis" which doesn't sound as epic god-like as a very clear and calm "I Am Sarapis".
I still think you're talking a bit fast IMO, although it's better than
the last time. Also the sound has that weird "I am speaking through a
mic" effect (I dunno how to describe it), but I figure that's cause
you're doing it in your office.
The artwork is still moving pretty fast and that God's photozoom thing is also still a bit jarring to me. Maybe it's because the picture is actually a close-up of the god pic, I keep expecting to see more detail as the pic moves away from the camera and then it stops at a close-up quite suddenly.
I suggest either the picture moves slower and fades further and further backwards (giving viewers time to appreciate the artwork as a whole) Or you have the pictures moving towards the camera instead. Either option will add a few more seconds to the video.
Unfortunately, in the case of every picture but the Sarapis one, the picture is zoomed out to the maximum we can without exposing filler bars on the sides of the pictures and while preserving picture quality. 16:9 is the standard ratio for video, but almost all of our art is, inconveniently, in a vertical format rather than horizontal.
So, Achaea is actually named after the city-state in classical Greece. Nobody knows how classical Greek was pronounced, so I could have it wrong, but regardless, that's how our world is pronounced. ah-KAY-ah
Ancient greek pronunciation was indeed different than modern greek, but should be close enough. We still have a regional unit called Achaea and since I'm not familiar with writing pronunciation, that's pretty much how we say/pronounce it, if anybody's interested:
I understand though that when you turn the word to an English version or let an english speaking person say it, the pronunciation changes a bit (I also read it (almost) as you pronounce it in the video, it's written in english/latin characters after all, not greek..)
Yeah, in Greek, the "ch" in Achaea would be pronounced like the Scotch ch in "loch" or the ch/x in German/Russian, etc. Since that sound doesn't exist in English, it's just typically replaced by a "k" sound.
I have an education in ancient Greek and Latin (5 years on both, in a Classic Lyceum). As far as I know, @Iocun and @Josul are correct. I can confirm the following:
Α is like your A pronunciation in Alpha
χ is like your .... no, you do not have it. It should sound like K in Kilo, but with aspiration (Loch is a perfect example).
αΐ is like your E in bed, and where the accent is.
α is like your A pronunciation in Alpha.
Funny thing is that while I still remember Latin, Ancient Greek is something you easily forget. Anyway, why the realm was named Achaea in the first place?
Ok, here is a new version. I speak slower, the vocal tone and volume should be consistent (and better), and there are some minor changes to the video too. @Jhaeli Thanks for the Audition tip. That's some great software.
That sounds so, so much better now. Good job on the read.
"Gilgamesh, where are you hurrying to? You will never find that [everlasting] life for which you are looking. When the gods created man they allotted to him death, but life they retained in their own keeping. As for you, Gilgamesh, fill your belly with good things; day and night, night and day, dance and be merry, feast and rejoice. Let your clothes be fresh, bathe yourself in water, cherish the little child that holds your hand, and make your wife happy in your embrace; for this too is the lot of man."
You have a great voice. Did you want some voiceover work?
I love the video!
My only concern is that while I understand that it requires neat graphics to appeal to the masses, you may want to do some text along with it, so that people do not think they their ears are deceiving them and they are looking at a graphical game (or :: shudder :: WoW!).
By the way, is it bad that my mental images are *nothing* like I just saw?
Answer: No it is not! Woot!
Deborah
on behalf of Prythe
P.S. Agree with @Valden about pronunciation of the game (drat, been doing it wrong all these years) and of Sarapis as well. Oy!
- To love another person is to see the face of G/d - Let me get my hat and my knife - It's your apple, take a bite - Don't dream it ... be it
Anyway, why the realm was named Achaea in the first place?
Well, I was quite into classical history at the time, and because Mudconnector (which used to matter) had a giant mud list ordered alphabetically (and was the main list of MUDs people looked at), I wanted a name that would come towards the top of the list. Nothing more complicated than that!
Anyway, why the realm was named Achaea in the first place?
I wanted a name that would come towards the top of the list. Nothing more complicated than that!
Sarapis is win.
"Under all that we think, lives all that we believe, like the ultimate veil of our spirits." --Antonio Machado
"The belief that becomes truth for me is that which allows me the best use of my strength, the best means of putting my virtues into action." --Andre Gide
"It is not enough to have a good mind; the main thing is to use it well." --Rene Descartes
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The artwork is still moving pretty fast and that God's photozoom thing is also still a bit jarring to me. Maybe it's because the picture is actually a close-up of the god pic, I keep expecting to see more detail as the pic moves away from the camera and then it stops at a close-up quite suddenly.
I suggest either the picture moves slower and fades further and further backwards (giving viewers time to appreciate the artwork as a whole) Or you have the pictures moving towards the camera instead. Either option will add a few more seconds to the video.
That will also give you time to pace your narration a little slower as well. My opinion is that if you get the pacing of the video to a comfortable level, the narration will follow naturally.
Also the very first line just bugs me. It sounds like you're saying "I'm Sarapis" which doesn't sound as epic god-like as a very clear and calm "I Am Sarapis".
→My Mudlet Scripts
"Gilgamesh, where are you hurrying to? You will never find that [everlasting] life for which you are looking. When the gods created man they allotted to him death, but life they retained in their own keeping. As for you, Gilgamesh, fill your belly with good things; day and night, night and day, dance and be merry, feast and rejoice. Let your clothes be fresh, bathe yourself in water, cherish the little child that holds your hand, and make your wife happy in your embrace; for this too is the lot of man."
- To love another person is to see the face of G/d
- Let me get my hat and my knife
- It's your apple, take a bite
- Don't dream it ... be it
Very soon. Hopefully this week, after which we'll be making another round of improvements to it.
Hopefully I'll have some fun here. Oh yeah @Sarapis sent me.