One too many oranges

This is the story I submitted for the Q1 bardics. It did not make the cut. I hope you enjoy it, and please leave some feedback?

Comments

  • I liked it, thanks for sharing
    Hiroma tells you, "I just got to listen to someone complain about your deadly axekick being the bane of their existence."
    Archdragon Mizik Corten, Herald of Ruin says, "Man, that was a big axk."
    Hellrazor Cain de Soulis, Sartan's Hammer says, "Your [sic] a beast."
  • (;_; ) that was really sweet at the end there.
    "Faded away like the stars in the morning,
     Losing their light in the glorious sun,
     Thus would we pass from this earth and its toiling,
     Only remembered for what we have done."

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