Morwen
Feb 9 2009, 05:39 AM
QUOTE (Pentharian @ Feb 27 2008, 12:22 AM)

2. Nothing that violates any existing forum rules. In general, nudity is fine if it's tasteful and makes sense. If you post things just so you can say "Look! Boobs!" we'll likely change things so that there is none allowed.
Hopefully this is tastefully nude?

Lexa
Siren runewarden, gearing up and enjoying a typical cyrenian morning.
Commissioned, work in progress; fingers and face are missing (placeholders) and the clock hands are random.
Rynn
Feb 9 2009, 05:42 AM
I like it, though I don't like the character herself. Was this commissioned?
Sena
Feb 9 2009, 05:55 AM
That seems tasteful to me, there's nothing explicit about it.
DetheaLesDitor
Feb 9 2009, 06:51 AM
I'd hit it.
(nice, I really like this one)
Amunet
Feb 9 2009, 08:15 AM
I like the drawing, but if the character actually walks around in a translucent gown in-game and she runs into my character, I'm totally going to kick her in the poon.
Rynn
Feb 9 2009, 08:32 AM
Morwen needs to draw the above happening. O_O
The inevitable Beldaran
Feb 9 2009, 08:41 AM
QUOTE (Amunet @ Feb 9 2009, 03:15 AM)

I like the drawing, but if the character actually walks around in a translucent gown in-game and she runs into my character, I'm totally going to kick her in the poon.

I love you.

I like the drawing, too. Thankfully, I don't know the character to spoil the enjoyment of the artwork.
Morwen
Feb 9 2009, 09:23 AM
Thanks for the comments! As this is an art thread, I really appreciate the maturity from everyone (Rukimoro is apparently sleeping

) regarding the drawing itself without starting a character rant.
PS.
@Rynn: you still owe me for the xoranmonkaxkpwningserpentwhileholdingcake drawing, after we settle that debt you can tell me about this crotchkick project of yours...
@Amunet: the story goes that the drawn character just woke up and is about to get dressed (the armour in the background), and people do wear weird things in bed, if anything at all
SlyViolin
Feb 9 2009, 10:36 AM
I really wish I had a tablet, and a arty program.
My only real criticism is with her left shoulder, the upper arm is to scrawny coming from such a muscular shoulder. Make the upper arm a little thicker or cut down the mass on the shoulder a little.
Other then that, very nice!
Darroth
Feb 9 2009, 04:15 PM
fap
Tohran
Feb 9 2009, 04:34 PM
QUOTE (Darroth @ Feb 9 2009, 04:15 PM)

fap
I was expecting that alot sonner actually.
Cieran
Feb 9 2009, 05:11 PM
QUOTE (DetheaLesDitor @ Feb 9 2009, 12:51 AM)

I'd hit it.
(nice, I really like this one)
khalid
Feb 11 2009, 04:07 AM
Why is that thing in the upper left humping the clock tower?
Laorir
Feb 11 2009, 05:57 AM
QUOTE (khalid @ Feb 10 2009, 11:07 PM)

Why is that thing in the upper left humping the clock tower?
That's what dragons do in their spare time. What else is there to do after bashing your way to dragon?
Simoln
Feb 11 2009, 06:05 AM
QUOTE (Laorir @ Feb 10 2009, 09:57 PM)

QUOTE (khalid @ Feb 10 2009, 11:07 PM)

Why is that thing in the upper left humping the clock tower?
That's what dragons do in their spare time. What else is there to do after bashing your way to dragon?
How about dying to goats? What the hell, man, what the hell.
Manny
Feb 11 2009, 04:55 PM
Knowing Lexa, at least the character, this one makes me smile. A lot. Gives me reason to chuckle at her.
Gayat
Feb 11 2009, 07:04 PM
Wow.
Slick
Feb 11 2009, 07:48 PM
QUOTE (Morwen @ Feb 9 2009, 12:39 AM)

QUOTE (Pentharian @ Feb 27 2008, 12:22 AM)

2. Nothing that violates any existing forum rules. In general, nudity is fine if it's tasteful and makes sense. If you post things just so you can say "Look! Boobs!" we'll likely change things so that there is none allowed.
Hopefully this is tastefully nude?

Lexa
Siren runewarden, gearing up and enjoying a typical cyrenian morning.
Commissioned, work in progress; fingers and face are missing (placeholders) and the clock hands are random.
Nice.
I think you would be (or are) good with watercolors.
Dusty
Feb 11 2009, 08:09 PM
I wouldn't consider an ass nudity at all. This is about as tasteful as you can get. Nice work, clean it up though, please. Curtain is way too blurry, as well.
Desma
Feb 11 2009, 11:23 PM
Oh no! A buttcrack!
No, this is perfectly tasteful nudity and a nice enough picture. If you kept working on it and really polished it off it would look great but I understand that takes effort and I for one wouldn't have the patience and talent for it.
Dusty
Feb 11 2009, 11:26 PM
Oh ya... a bit of anatomical problems. Why does her arm shrink off into a tiny hand? The scabbard also doesn't follow the perspective and angle of her hand.
Something is also off about her breast(specifically the underside of it), probably the way it rounds off of her torso rather than lays over, given the size.
Morwen
Feb 12 2009, 12:00 AM
QUOTE (Dusty @ Feb 11 2009, 06:26 PM)

Oh ya... a bit of anatomical problems. Why does her arm shrink off into a tiny hand? The scabbard also doesn't follow the perspective and angle of her hand.
Something is also off about her breast(specifically the underside of it), probably the way it rounds off of her torso rather than lays over, given the size.
Maybe....siren boobs don't sag?
Dusty
Feb 12 2009, 12:02 AM
QUOTE (Morwen @ Feb 11 2009, 07:00 PM)

QUOTE (Dusty @ Feb 11 2009, 06:26 PM)

Oh ya... a bit of anatomical problems. Why does her arm shrink off into a tiny hand? The scabbard also doesn't follow the perspective and angle of her hand.
Something is also off about her breast(specifically the underside of it), probably the way it rounds off of her torso rather than lays over, given the size.
Maybe....siren boobs don't sag?

It's not about sag... it just doesn't seem fitting is all. Maybe it doesn't need to do what I said, but I think the curve of it is wrong.
Something like this:

The curve you have has a more... masculine shape to it. Hard to explain why.
Iocun
Feb 12 2009, 12:45 AM
It looks fine to me
Adalie
Feb 12 2009, 02:28 AM
I think Dusty is on to something.
Draekar
Feb 12 2009, 07:31 AM
QUOTE (Adalie @ Feb 12 2009, 03:28 PM)

I think Dusty is on to something.
Fixed
I think Dusty spent too long staring at the breast
Dusty
Feb 12 2009, 07:46 AM
QUOTE (Draekar @ Feb 12 2009, 02:31 AM)

QUOTE (Adalie @ Feb 12 2009, 03:28 PM)

I think Dusty is on to something.
Fixed
I think Dusty spent too long staring at the breast

Totally. I love staring at painted sideboob.
erisycthon
Feb 12 2009, 08:18 AM
Hot.
Shame it's Lexa.
Morwen
Feb 12 2009, 11:24 AM
QUOTE (Dusty @ Feb 12 2009, 02:46 AM)

QUOTE (Draekar @ Feb 12 2009, 02:31 AM)

QUOTE (Adalie @ Feb 12 2009, 03:28 PM)

I think Dusty is on to something.
Fixed
I think Dusty spent too long staring at the breast

Totally. I love staring at painted sideboob.
QUOTE (erisycthon @ Feb 12 2009, 03:18 AM)

Hot.
Shame it's Lexa.
Eri, commission me to draw your manboobs for Dusty to stare at...
Two birds, one stone
Dusty
Feb 12 2009, 07:52 PM
I stand by what I said, though.
erisycthon
Feb 12 2009, 11:35 PM
QUOTE (Morwen @ Feb 12 2009, 05:24 AM)

QUOTE (Dusty @ Feb 12 2009, 02:46 AM)

QUOTE (Draekar @ Feb 12 2009, 02:31 AM)

QUOTE (Adalie @ Feb 12 2009, 03:28 PM)

I think Dusty is on to something.
Fixed
I think Dusty spent too long staring at the breast

Totally. I love staring at painted sideboob.
QUOTE (erisycthon @ Feb 12 2009, 03:18 AM)

Hot.
Shame it's Lexa.
Eri, commission me to draw your manboobs for Dusty to stare at...
Two birds, one stone

Erisycthon doesn't really have manboobs, though. He's lanky and froggish. Maybe a bit of a ponch, but nothing higher than that.
Metzger
Feb 13 2009, 01:39 AM

Erisycthon.
Manny
Feb 13 2009, 04:28 AM
...Hahahahahahahahahahaha! Love it!
Morwen
Feb 27 2009, 11:58 PM
Here's the final version. I fixed some of the things that people mentioned. Thanks all.
Maximo
Mar 1 2009, 08:03 AM
Now her boobs blend in with the background
Metzger
Mar 1 2009, 08:09 AM
Maximo demands more bust. He demands it!
Dyzanru
Mar 1 2009, 10:56 PM
I think we need one from a different angle.
Adalie
Mar 2 2009, 02:49 AM
QUOTE (Maximo @ Mar 1 2009, 02:03 AM)

Now her boobs blend in with the background

Yeah. It kind of looks like she has no boob.
Jules
Mar 2 2009, 03:02 AM
Yah, put her boob back!
Trici
Mar 2 2009, 03:22 AM
QUOTE (Adalie @ Mar 1 2009, 08:49 PM)

QUOTE (Maximo @ Mar 1 2009, 02:03 AM)

Now her boobs blend in with the background

Yeah. It kind of looks like she has no boob.
No, guuuuuys.
Don't you get it?
That's
Kiet, now.
Jules
Mar 2 2009, 03:25 AM
No way does Kiet have a luscious booty like that
Trici
Mar 2 2009, 04:23 AM
QUOTE (Jules @ Mar 1 2009, 09:25 PM)

No way does Kiet have a luscious booty like that

Haven't you read his description?
Zenii
Mar 6 2009, 09:06 AM
I really like this picture.
The detail in the armour is something I really appreciate. Beyond the obvious time that it took to do this, the fact you actually did the armour piece by piece is a bonus to the eye.
Hipsana
Mar 6 2009, 10:34 AM
Moar

pls.
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