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@Nellaundra And to follow Phaestus' grammar nazi ways, I think this sentence has an incorrect comma usage since both parts could stand independently as sentences.That impression is further amplified by her height, at just under five feet she could easily be compared to a youngster.
Semicolons are the beautiful lovechildren of commas and colons.
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"Gilgamesh, where are you hurrying to? You will never find that [everlasting] life for which you are looking. When the gods created man they allotted to him death, but life they retained in their own keeping. As for you, Gilgamesh, fill your belly with good things; day and night, night and day, dance and be merry, feast and rejoice. Let your clothes be fresh, bathe yourself in water, cherish the little child that holds your hand, and make your wife happy in your embrace; for this too is the lot of man."
should be "he looks like a broke ass"
"Slowly disappear. Never really here."
Semicolon misuse. As "his form and features hidden underneath a white sheet with eyeholes" is a dependent clause, a comma should be used instead.